RUBRIC OF THE ONLINE JOURNAL

 

TOPIC AND SENTENCE OUTLINE- THE TITLE

 SENTENCES AND TOPIC OUTLINE:

The outline: This is a formal outline that will help you for our final research work. You must present you thesis, the main points in support of that thesis, and the sub-points that support each main point. you can have different additional levels of sub-points if you think it is necessary.

BENEFITS OF AN OUTLINE: That can be helpful for two reasons: 

1-That is help us to make your essay more organized. The plan will help your body paragraph stay focused on the ideas in your thesis statement.

2- The outline save time for the writers. When you make your outline that cant take time but when you are finished u will be ready to start your essay more quickly.

TYPES OF OUTLINE:

A- Topic Outline

       B- Sentences Outline 

The topic outline: You have to put your ideas hierarchically, showing the principal topics and the sub-pints, you have to show what you will talk about.

The sentences outline: That will shows exactly what are you saying in mini-topics, in this case each sentence you have to put and identity a mini-topic. The sentences outline expresses the complete idea and that will cover as part of proving the overall thesis.

MY SENTENCES OUTLINE:

1- Thesis Statement: The main reasons how the attacks change the system how we know it are: International Security, Fight against terrorism and Technological Developments.

2- Body Paragraphs: 

    A) International Security: Change a lot after the terrorism attack and different nations start to take more importance of security aspects. 

    B) The fight against terrorism: Different programs were created in the United Nations in order to confront the terrorism.

    C) Technological Developments: Around the world different countries started to reinforce their security aspect and try to save they borders.

3- Conclusion: The terrorism made big changes around the world in different aspects, the United State started the fight against terrorism in positive and negative ways, three important results of that attack start with the international security, the fight against terrorism and the technological developments.

THE TITLE:

CHARACTERISTIC: 

1- Choosing the right title is essential.

2- The title make idea of your paper what is going to talk about.

3- When you choosing your title that means you have a control of your topic. 

PRINCIPLES OF HOW TO MAKE A GREAT TITLE:

 -A good title summarizes the main idea of the paper.

- The title would identify the key issues on your investigation.

-A good title have a extension of 12 words or less. 

-The great title include only the words that contribute of the meaning.

-Try to not use abbreviations.

Examples of incorrect and correct titles:

Incorrect title:

-The globalization help us to connect around the world in on second.

-The corruption of the different nations make more poor the countries not have strict politics. 

Correct title: 

-Effects of the great education in underdeveloped countries.

-What is the important of the countries has good institutions.

 

 

 

 

Types of paragraph, Graphic Organizer and essay.

 TYPES OF PARAGRAPH:

Basic types of paragraph:

1-Narrative

2- Descriptive

3- Expository

4- Persuasive

 

GRAPHIC ORGANIZER:

The graphic organizers can help us to organize your ideas for writing. Graphic organizers help the students understand the different concepts more effectively, that information synthesized helps us understand the essay better.

TYPES OF GRAPHIC ORGANIZER: 

-Cause-effect organizer

-Problem-Solution Web

-Time Line

-Evaluation Collection Grid

-Venn Diagram

-Line Diagram

THE CAUSE EFFECT ORGANIZER:

Cause and Effect diagrams, that diagram helps us to know what happen and what is the result of an action.

 

PROBLEM SOLUTION WEB:

Diagram to identify a problem and it´s solutions.

 

TIME LINE:

Graphic that shows event and sequence, often include dates.

 

EVALUATION COLLECTION GRID:

Use to collect supporting details for essays of evaluation.

VENN DIAGRAM:

Use to collect details to compare and contrast two topics.

  LINE DIAGRAM:

Use to collect and organize details for academic essays.

MY GRAPHIC ORGANIZER OF MY ESSAY:

THE SOCIAL IMPACT OF SEPTEMBER 11 ATTACKS.

How much do you think the world has changed after the fall of the twin towers? An event that marked life in the United States and around the world, where the lives of approximately 3,000 people were lost, and what can be considered the largest terrorist attack of all.There is an extensive dialogue discussing how the system as we know it changed, and among the main reasons that we can mention are international security, which goes hand in hand with the fight against terrorism, as well as technological developments that allow facing future surprise attacks.

First, International Security saw a radical change in the United State and around the world. The president at the time was George Bush, and he had a vision in which security not only had to change at his borders but went even further, and we can see it from several points of view. The first point of view being security aspects, by increasing security at his borders and airports, it allowed to have greater control of people and have a more rigorous process. As well as that we also see greater control in the country´s internal policies, however this change brought a negative aspect in which people of Arabia and Muslin origin were discriminated, and this misconception was created where Americans had to fear and support this security movement for the good of the United States.

In addition to this, the vision of the United States of fighting against terrorism continues to this day. It is observed in different States that support the movement, to eradicate terrorism, and different programs have been created in the UN (United Nations) to confront it in some way. For example the United States highlights the military intervention to counter terrorism with the support of the international community, the implementation of fear in the world generated this movement to fight against terrorism.

Additionally, technological revolution in the security aspect was also further developed.  Terrorism was officially a concrete reality in which the place and time of the next attack was unknown, and that is where the United States began to take into account the importance of increasing their security. It is at this point when security aspects had a ¨boom¨ where the sophistication of the means of control of people began, in order to avoid an attack again, as well as to obtain information globally, which would help in the fight against terrorism. As time goes by, security measures are becoming more sophisticated to control any possible event.

Furthermore, the attacks on the twin towers marked a before and after regarding different issues that bring with them both positive and negative consequences, where the United states States generated fear and therefore began a trend to protect their airports and borders more strictly, as well as increased to a very high level of security, different methods were also developed by the United States as a fight against terrorism, like an increase in security in political aspects that generated greater control in the population, which also brought discrimination and racism towards people from the middle east.